I heartilly agree with your appraisal of Susan Bones. I have only found 3 other fanfiction stories that pair her with Harry, and all three are incomplete. I am exceedingly happy to find this story of yours. I have only finished the first chapter and am truly enjoying the quality of your writing and applaud the person that is your editor. I didn't find a single spelling/grammar/punctuation error in it. Too many stories are posted without being edited and suffer tremendously for the lack. Once again, great story. I'm really looking forward to the rest of it.