Review for To Fight the Coming Darkness

To Fight the Coming Darkness

(#) The_Resident 2006-04-28

Looks like Ginny has the 'green eyes' now. -grin- Anyway, nice chapter. I know you're taking it slow with Harry and Susan, but they need some interaction or they won't be together at the end of the story. I'd really like to see Ron grow up, but that seems to be a lost cause. Molly's rants are famous and looks like Ginny inheirited the ability. Damn,you think that if they really cared for him, they'd ask about his welfare first, before the rant. Probably one of the many reasons Harry ends up with Susan. Well, I'm off to read the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Oh, BTW, I found this:
'I just got off a Gringotts.'
I think you meant
'I just got off at Gringotts.'