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Review for
Desert Walk
Desert Walk
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street-howitzer
2007-01-16
A few corrections:
"as if the last 13 year had never happened" - years
"leave him with a soothing and lulling caress" - Leaving him?
And again, a great sequel to a great story. :) Can't wait to read the third one!