(#) JBern 2007-01-16
Still a very inviting story that I am enjoying immensely. My only complaint is that Harry doesn't seem to be maturing that much or at least that is my impression and it might be my perception that is the problem. Loved Snape whining about study groups. Nice original move with the rhino. Would be interesting to see the rhino square off against Bella's form. I like your disjointed Bellatrix, much more lost than manical. It makes me curious to know the reason she wants to find Neville. Best of luck continuing~Jim