I already marveled at your (and Bridget's) talent on "Love is only love" but WOW.
I am a horror fanatic so this is my kinda drug.
At first I was thinking "Ok, this really is very much like 'Saw'." but what does that matter? Your skill at descriptive language (both the environment and Pete and Jayce's feelings, pain, etc.) and general narrative ability makes this story original nonetheless.
I have a very stupid question: This isn't a one-shot, is it? Because I checked and it says that it's not finished yet. I am just slightly confused because of the ending of this chapter.
I really hope more of this will follow. :)
If you couldn't tell, I had to rate this "ambiance" because I was there, watching Pete going through his blood for the key. shudders
Bravo!
Author's response
oh snap, my bad! this is a one shot, mostly because I already made up the ending and I have to idea how to get them out of Jigsaw's creepy warehouse. sorry!