While I'm very much enjoying this story I have a couple of questions.
A rhinoceros? C'mon! Harry needs to be the Jaguar, or some other predatory animal not a quick tempered near-sighted ungulate with a sharp horn made of hair. Please tell me there was a problem with the revealing potion. A rhino. Please.
Will Luna and Harry become closer or drift apart? I would hate to see their troth broken - they are so good together. Any chance of an update anytime soon? (I'll update mine if you update yours. . .)
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Author's response
Near-sighted, quick tempered, powerful -- sounds like Harry to me.
The next chapter (or two, if my beta finds some place to break it) is already being beta-ed. After that, however, there will be another delay.
Thanks for reviewing.