Yeah, I really don't like Brenda... I'm all for Team Carl. Besides, Carl is such a better name, so she just HAS to be way cooler. And she gets along so well with Dax. Oh! I bet ever her dogs would even like Dax better than Wesley does. Okay, I'm reading too much into this.
So I rated this ambiance because I actually made a face at the techno comment. Who actually admits to listening to that? (I mean, we all do sometimes, but you don't actually TELL anyone. Especially a boy)
Anywho, write another chapter!
Author's response
Yeah, Brenda is not very likable, is she? Ha ha.
Right. ;) Thanks for the r&r... &r!