Highly enjoyable.
From the dates, i assume this story has been abandoned, and that's a crying shame. I sense great potential here, and unfortunatelly that tends to lead to writer's blocks, i know. The girl is quite credible as a halfhuman, and Snape has a certain credibility as well, in that he seems to be a good, but not very nice, person. Stern, not rough. The girl is not very credible as human, since she still had enough fight in her to ask for help. A human girl would have been broken, and i believe her degradation should have been on the NC-17 scale as well. Less is not absolutely incredible, but close. I would guess Fae are more resilient. I would dearly love to read more.
May Robert Lind in Kramfors bless your keyboard.
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