I love it when i find a new author to idolize for a while.
You have made a very original and fascinating Harry here. This "public facade" kind of thing is great, and so's his compatrick. The concept of the Indigo is a bit murky still, but i guess it'll clear up if it has to.
I have a soft spot for SuperHarry, but i dislike all the usual empowering schemes. You made Harry Super from the start, and then he's playing it down. Great is not enough! I believe Maria is a bit too sketchy still to have a feel for, and i have to call her Mary-Sue at this time, but that doesn't mean i mind. After all, a well-written M-S beats a sloppy original every time. That you're writing both Harry and Maria as adults, with his yearmates as adolescents is just fan-bloody-tastic.
This was not the waste of time i was really looking for.
Thanx
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