It wasn't bad, I liked the poem a lot. And I'm guessing Archie's going next. :P
But I swear, I was going to do the exact same thing! lol. It's weird because I was gonna do a thing where each person wrote a poem in a journal, but I don't really wanna copy your idea. It's not exactly the same though, more of a story, so could you let me know if I can still do it? I don't wanna steal your idea or anything.