Well I wasn't expecting it to be a Mighty Ducks/Biker Mice crossover, but it was pretty good nonetheless. One thing though, it was kinda confusing in parts as there wasn't much background information and scene setting and the like, it was all mainly dialogue. It's got my curiosity going though and I'd love to read more :)
Author's response
I'm more then willing to post the original version. I created this version after I got slammed for having 'too much chatter and confusing information.' I tend to work on it bit by bit by going back and re-reading what's already been written. I'm more then willing to do character profiles on the bro's kids if that'll make life easier for you.