Review for Falling

Falling

(#) Jelly_Belly 2006-05-04

This was really good. But I don't find Chase that angsty. I mean he is in alot of pain. But he would be more carful not to show it to Cameron. Well writen. ;)

Author's response

Apparently, you're not familiar with what "taking liberties" means, which was clearly stated in the beginning of the story. But thanks for taking the time to read it anyway. :)