Review for Black Vengeance - 1

Black Vengeance - 1

(#) cjonbloodletter 2007-01-25

Hey great fic so far. I love the details you've put in this and I would love to see this continue. As for pairings... You know, to tell you the truth, I've never really cared for either Hermione or Cho. Cho's way to self focussed(insecure and paranoid too, I think she's probably doing drugs to help with the pressure of being the all around perfect girl at school). Hermione is to focussed on everything but her self, alienating people with her self righteous bull$#%*(there are kids on this site). I don't believe Harry as a character has room to grow in either relationship, Cho would have him enslaved to her insecure ways and Hermione's domineering personality would errode Harry's.I'm gonna add this story to my favorites as I see great pottential in it.
Keep it up,
Cjon the Bloodletter
Conqueror of the Dark Realms

Author's response

Thanks for reading and revewing. I intend to develop both Hermione and Cho in my story, so we will have a chance to discuss what is better. Thanks for your opinions regarding the ship. The next chapter should be up in a few minutes.
Regards,
Maidros