Not bad... glad to see some Cho interaction, although I will hope for more and that it ends up as Harry/Cho, as Hermione is close to the Weasley family.
Author's response
Thanks for reading and reviewing. As for Cho, you will start a lot more of interaction with Cho starting Chapter 6, when Harry meets with her mum. Slight spoiler: You saw what Cho's mum is - well, Cho is a Ravenclaw; so I am sure you can figure out the direction the initial conversations will be taking.
Thanks for your opinions.
Regards,
Maidros