Hey first off I very much like your story, seems to be well written and has enough intrigue to interest me greatly but I have a question for you, do you have this somewhere else? Cause this sure reminds me of another story I have read? I'm not saying anything by it, just seems to remind me is all. Maybe this is a re-edited version of this? I dont know just wondering is all.
Definitely going to keep an eye on this, damn interesting. just wish there was more to it.
Author's response
Thanks for your interest, and thanks for reading and reviewing. As for your question - no, this is not a re-edited version of an older story, nor has it been posted anywhere else.
Thanks for the encouragement.
Regards,
Maidros