Lovely chapter as always. Loved the hat comment. How do you come up with these things?
Anyway, I was having a fun time not liking Brenda and there you go making her seem all human and real. I can't hate her so much anymore. sigh Oh well.
I really liked this chapter, it came together very nicely. Every now and then a 'slower' chapter is needed just to tie up lose ends, but as always it had your quirky humor, so it didn't realy lose anything. And I finally got to give you a point! Yay for being on top of things for once.
Author's response
The secret to coming up with these things is shutting of your brain. I think?
Yeah, that was the whole idea. ;) I tend to be lazy with the FOB characters but I want (at least some of) my original ones to be more than black/ white shadows of characters.
Thank you for the praise, the point and your own awesome story! :)