(#) Jexia 2005-04-02
I enjoyed this. Truth to tell, because you write some Wolfwood/Vash, I didn't realize this was about Severus Snape and someone else until later. It could have been about any two lovers, in fact, and I related to the universality of the story. I was going to praise you for your insight, but found a little prompt, next to the metarate button, that noted that a previous viewer had done the same. But it is the truth, that you do show a lot of insight into the human condition and the unspoken words that create gaps between lovers.