Decent enough update, a bit worse than the last one, but still good.
Bill's letter to the Order was great. I was wondering when they'd find out, and how. Hope to get some reactions from them and Luna before too long.
Author's response
Sorry you felt it wasn't up to standards anything in particular you felt was a letdown? Notice Bill didn't tell the Order how they got into the city. Harry told Luna, that may come back to haunt him...
Regards,
Jim