Gah! Finally I get to read this story! I'm so impressed with your ideas and new characters! I don't know if you've got this all planned out or if you're just winging it as you type LOL, but it's all being put together in my head and has me sitting at the edge of my seat! I can't wait to find out if Danny is really good or not.
The only critisism I'd say would be that it happens fast. I like to read about how the characters feeling throughout the chapter and what they are thinking. Maybe that's why my chapters are usualy as long as the bible, lol. But that's just me being picky. Just keep doing what you do, because it is effective.
Update soon,
-Gucci84