Sorry I didn’t review earlier (blame the missing chapter alert feature :D). Well, imho interesting, but mucht too short. I hope in the next chapter more happens and Harry gets his proof.
Max
Author's response
Heh, It's all good. And you can blame a power outage that I didn't respond before now:P Yea, that chapter was really small, but I felt it was a good cut-off spot for what comes next. Unfortunatly it may be a while longer before my next chapter comes out, as I've had some RL issues get in the way of writing, but no worries, it'll be here soon,
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