hhaha, its a cute idea... and i like it... but there are some issues, you dont need to explain what he looks like when it doesnt have anything to do with setting the mood... Readers who read these fan fictions, normally know what the characters look like. I'm sure that he wont be able to keep up the hand kissing charade for too long... its just not miroku's style. he's a lecher... and he will probably never change.
but i did think it was cute.