Review for The Chieftain

The Chieftain

(#) jabarber69 2007-02-04

I got to tell you, while I will of course continue reading for now, I got to tell you this harry potter is a sure fire fucking idiot! Yes I agree he needs to strike out on his own, but he also seems to be too trusting or just to damn stupid! Yes the two girls might be allies, but trust is earned not given! also English is either not your native language or you are trying to use big words that dont make any sense. some of your phrases dont jive, dont make sense - read in calm, it should say read in peace. But otherwise like I said I will still read it cause basically you have a good ideal.