seriously this is a weird story. no details really included in the long run. Kind of boring all together, I don't really like it, no substensual chararistics(spelled?).
Sorry to sound harsh but i'm a very forward person, some stories i like, some I don't. Your's just falls under the don't catagory. sorry -
Laura
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honestly? i don't care if you like it or not. but thanks for the honesty. it's nice to hear once in a while.