Review for Changes

Changes

(#) gucci84 2007-02-05

Ouuuu this is good!

It happens a little fast in some spots. I didn't know Delilah wasn't in her bed when Julius went to wake her up until I read lower. Specify their findings as they go along.

Other than that, good story idea. This really had my eye brows raise. Good job. Update soon.

-Gucci