swoon like seriously swoon almost makes me want to go get a needle inject ink into all 7 layers of skin. shudder
...I still think you should go the Patrick/Lola route. even if I did swoon.
fabulous chapter my love. fabulous.
Author's response
Ouch. I can't believe I made Pete swoon-worthy. I was going to give that scene to Patrick, but he doesn't need it. Guys like Pete have to try hard. Patrick doesn't. He's adorable all by himself. Keep your eyes peeled for the Patrick/Lola connection.