(#) koppe 2007-02-06
Good start. Though I hope for a bit more of an explaination -- especially the reasons by Harry forgiving his guardians.
Would love for the Dursleys (due to Vernon's "lack of exposure") to exposed to a bit of Wizarding-culture -- maybe seeing Diagon-alley or Hogwarts... perhaps even meeting someone as bigoted as Vernon, but the other way around -- like the Malfoys.
Keep up the good work,
-Koppe