after the first chapter i thought "interesting story idea, lets see where it will be going...", NOW i found myself confused!
i can't rate this story because i don't have an apropiate choice given...while it is ooc, it's fiction so that's normally given...
closest to describing it would be train wreck...BUT only up to now...how is it that after the first chapter, there is such a big leap? harry is suddenly a friend of nott and bullstrode? tutoring for arithmency and runes? while in third year, where the classes only started -even if he didn't took them-? why not help from gryffindors? or logically ravenclaws??
letters to mafalda and the weasleys are good! but why suddenly writing the malfoys???? he and draco have their own history, especially after dementor-look-a-like and hippogriff incidents in third year...harry and lucius had very serious trouble in his second year...heck, lucius let a basilisk loose in hogwarts and now suddenly...poof...all's big friendly and chummy??
i hope desperately that this will clear up in the next chapter!