OK? It's better than ok! It's fabulous, lady. It could have happened in any number of contrived ways. But that would have been bad, because it's not believable.
And that Brenda. Dumping poor Carl in an answering machine message. What a hoe! Joe deserves better. Make him see sense. PLEASE!!
"Jackpot, baby". You retain the comedy crown for the 20th consecutive week with that line there.
Now I have to decide what to give you a point for. Mm, decisions.....
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You always know how to make me feel alright about my crappy writing, dear. :) hug