anyways to finish what i wanted to say, I dont necissarily like Kikyo all that much at all, so i really like how you conveyed her to be such a bitchy character... when you had inuyasha tell her off in the way you did it can seem a bit
OOC but it still works ... i hate it when people make Kikyo the center of his love... she is that past that he never seems to be able to escape... so it was pretty refreshing to see him admit that he didnt truly love her anymore.
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i like how u put that--"she is that past that he never seems to be able to escape...". do u mind if i use that in another fic? that would be an AWESOME line for an InuKag...
i'm not a big fan of Kikyo either. she's okay, but i hate when people do the "falling in love all over again" fics. ur totally right, she is his past, not his future....although Kags also pisses me off occansionally...
and i know him telling her off was OOC a bit but i thought of that line to use for another one of my fics and it fit better in here, in that one he would have seemed WAAY outta character.
thanks for the review(s)!