"For a man-whore, he is surprisingly chivalrous." Hee! That line killed me.
Love the idea and the title. Sure, Wilson does seem more of a jerk in the story than in the show, but then again, this is from the perspective of his spurned wives. My only issue is that the minor errors in the narration ("faux," lack of quotation marks around song title) detract from the overall emotional impact. With some clean-up, though, it should be golden.
Author's response
Thanks so much! Sighs I know I need a beta, and have advertised for it on ff.net, but still; no takers. Maybe next chapter.
Thanks so much for the review!