great chapter! very exciting and original!
i have a question about the power-drain through the dark mark...voldemort doesn't have that many followers and just got 12 of them killed, so from whom does he leech off? (snape? karkaroff?)
please a h/hr pairing lateron...if she is turned than he has someone to turn to as a lantrisi...maybe you could include her in a moresome...harry booked 3 girls at the brothel so he definetely does have the stamina for it...