Oh, man. I never get tired of reading this story, I love it to death. It remains the most beautiful fanfic I've ever read, and one of the few I can read over and over. (And it isn't even pr0n.)
I think I caught one tiny inconsistancy, though; it says that Jack's newsie days aren't "that far" behind him, but then it later specifies it's been 14 years since he and David got together. But I suppose that's all in the definition of how far is that far, or something. And it certainly didn't take away from the sheer beauty of this fic.
I think this is the third time I've reviewed this and the third archive where it will be on my favorites. loves