I have to say that this is probably most confusing story to read that i've read in a long time.
Also isn't this supposed to be Magical triplet story not twin so where is the other girl who's supposed to be with Harry&Hermione. I think 16 chapters is little too long without her.
Author's response
This will be a very long story with a lot of chapters. It is like old wine or good sex. The best is the one who is going slow to the ecstasy.
Wim