Review for To Rewrite History

To Rewrite History

(#) Skoell 2007-02-14

nice chapter! great interaction between harry's old and new friends...
maybe harry was a little bit too good at occlumency (projecting himself while he even doesn't know how to clear his mind??) and a bit too fearless with his confrontation with voldie...

...why didn't he mention his vision about a barty? it might have given the former deatheaters a clue that crouch jr. is still alive and kicking??

...didn't like the thought of harry thinking about arranging a marriage with ginny...first i don't really like that pairing (=P)-aside from it being part of a moresome-...second i can't see harry arranging a marriage for connections, he already is the "10th weasley" and while arthur is well liked, he doesn't have that much sway in the pureblooded ministry as a muggleloving unambitious man...bill might be a connection to the goblins, but he works in egypt and i don't think he is that known in england's gringotts...the twins haven't started anything worth mentioning, yet and percy might be of help, if he follows harry's advise...for harry's political schemes it would be enough to be well liked with the weasleys and having malfoy's support and being the boy-who-lived and maybe freeing sirius and thereby getting another prominent and famous name in his boat...remus would be a great help with the werewolves...

but marrying ginny would only decrease his standing in my eyes...politically some might even think that the weasleys use harry and not the other way around...maybe you go a bit overboard with the slytherin-side of harry...i think he would still think a human is a human and not a price/token or some other political/worthy good...

if you think about these lines, you could also say, he should marry hermione because she is the brightest with in their generation and people would be reminded of harry's parents -which were also very popular and well liked- and it would also relax the people that see him suddenly in the company of known dark families....

but alas i think that harry wouldn't think soo shallow of marriage...
...and i'm more a fan of the h/hr-pairing...=P