Review for Luck
Nice twist, it was cool to read something origanal. Much better than anything ive writen or probebly will write.
Author's response
Don't be so harsh on yourself. I've been writing for a long time, and I think I could still use some work. It takes patience, but once you start picking out what you write best, you get better at it.
Thanks for the originality bit! Then again, we're still a fairly new community (so far as I know), so I guess there's still a fair amount of stuff that hasn't been covered.