Review for Luck
wow. that was really well written, although the begining could get a bit confusing, what with the two girls that the readers don't know.
the idea itself is great. i always new neil would probable be changed by the group..and the whole luck thing? amazing. congratulations.
Author's response
Yeah... I considered doing it from New-Neil PoV, but I wasn't certain just how to do it without ruining the ending. So we have the girls instead... :) Thanks! I had fun with this.