Very well written, chapter. I like how the Weasleys and Malfoys are coming to a sort of cease fire.
QUOTE: "Sir, Winky would like to sleep now. Sir has room in the tent?"
Is wildly out of character for Winky in Canon (she would never have the gumption to "interupt" her masters plans for the night by inserting that she wants something and asking to rest) but is well written for your "new" Fanon.