It's awesome. I think it is one of the best stories on here, seriously and I don't just say that. There are some things I was confused about. Where is the setting, what village? Also, is this a Kagome and Inuyasha where Kagome comes through the well? I was confused up until the middle when Naraku made his entry. But, all in all, I love the idea. It reminds me of the little mermaid story.
Author's response
Thanks! That means a lot to me! ^_^
The setting is in Feudal Japan, but it is AU, so there is no Shikon Jewel or falling down a well.