I like the way you are portraying the Hogwarts professors - they are involved and supportive. You did an excellent job with Neville, too. I could see his shock. This story is rapidly becoming a favorite.
Author's response
Thanks very much! I pulled from the behavior of people with phobias and how they behave when they're trying not to show any reaction. I'm glad you think it worked. Today ought to be a two-chapter update, by the by. I won't leave you hanging on that cliffie too long.