I read some of this on FFA.net, and was pleasantly surprised to discover you had it posted on ficwad as well. Your ability to present the characters and their inner motives is impressive. I love such character-driven fics. One question that struck me: How psychopathic is Neville going to get in his desire for revenge? So intriguing!
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My apologies for such a delay in my responses. Neville will get away with as much as circumstances let him....
Thank you for your comments~Jim