I've been following this (and the previous story) for a while now, but this is my first time reviewing. Just wanted to say you're doing an excellent job -- this is one of the most engaging fics I've read in the fandom!
Author's response
Really? Thank you so much! I'm really trying to do my best. I want to avoid being predictable. Readers like to be taken for a loop - from what I've seen - and I hope that I'm constantly leaving people swearing at their monitors and yelling "What the f*?!?!" I think that would be my biggest compliment. XD