What an INCREDIBLE chapter! :)
I am not surprised that I can't rate this up anymore.
I did NOT see this coming. Wow, I am excited.
And totally amused about people asking her for autographs and Patrick standing around like a complete no-name dude. ;)
Your updates always make my day.
Author's response
Thanks! You know, I'm glad you were surprised with the end. :) I was really afraid I would get bad reviews on this chapter because of it... I mean, when is the mob ever in FOB fanfic? Sounds a little out there, but hopefully I can pull it off... or else I'll get some bad rates and reviews. Oh well... I'm glad you liked!