Oh wow. Wow. Wow.
THAT was amazing.
There were so many things to love in this chapter. Link is just great. I love them all having their own little acquaintances, it keeps the theme running through. Yeah, more Link could never be a bad thing.
And the dry humping comment made me laugh like a mo-fo. Brilliant.
Perfectly timed and paced at the end there. But for a minute I thought you were going to let her walk away. And I was going to have to kill you. Ha.
Perfect chapter. Your best yet. I adore it. A measly point does not suffice. But have it anyway. xx
Author's response
I love you! This was the best comment ever! Seriously i am having the best week this week. Passed all my exams, posted a chapter, the sun is shining! Link and Logan are probably my favourites in the fic. Though i do like Patrick and may have to give him a larger part in the sequel! I thought about drawing the angst out abit....but then realised that everyone might hate me for it! Yey for points! This made my day! XX