Review for Falter


(#) riaryder 2007-02-21

Oh lady! Dun dun dun!
The suspense is killing me.
There are a million things I love about this story.
Oliver is such a dark horse. I love how you made me think he was really special, then threw in this deep dark and quite frankly crazy side of him. Super good work.
Peyton seemed like your usual head turned by fame kind of girl, but now we see there's so much more to her. Putting up with whatever shit Oliver's been throwing her. I am growing very fond of her.
Your Patrick is just SO right.Sweet, caring and sexy. And that bathroom scene was HOT.
I am waiting with baited breath for your next update. The bribery points are now automatic, you can count on 'em.

Author's response

lol, I love how you understand my characters. And thank you so much for the compliments! It makes me want to post what I already have written down, but I know its not enough. Just be prepared for a bit of suprises coming up!

PS. and I was hoping for hot in the bathroom scene...hehe hence the candles and the fire hazard.