I hope you will be pleased to know that I DID NOT see that coming. At all.
Great chapter, definitely original. And I would rate it so, but you've already maxed the ratings. Nice one!! You rock!
Author's response
Oo, yay, I surprised you with that, eh? That does please me. :) Anyway, thank you for all your wonderful reviews and making my ego substancially larger. lol. YOU rock!