Good chapter. Still a little short for my taste, however you were deliberately abrupt with the Bella/Harry conversation which suited the scene. I hope that you have an update shortly. I'm enjoying this story immensely.
Geovanni Luciano
Author's response
Thanks, as always, for reading and taking the time to review. My chapters tend to be a bit short, but I like to update every three to four days, I can combine chapters and publish less often but I think most readers prefer more frequent updates; or rather I do. I'm glad you're enjoying the story; I should have another update tomorrow or Saturday.
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