(#) koppe 2007-02-22
Great story so far.
I hope Harry will soon be able to rescue Belatrix and his unborn daughter -- and that he'll be able to put in a good word for her (Bella)... at least so she won't get the kiss and will be allowed visits from her daughter as she grows-up (and yes, I hope for a sequal focusing on the daughter... maybe attending Hogwarts).
Ideally I'd like Harry, Marie and Bella in some sort of relationship (some sort of marriage?), but I guess Bella may have quite a few years left in Azkaban on general principle.
I would also love Harry and his squad going on some mission.
I'd love a little bit about Harry's other friends (Ron, Hermione, ...) -- their reaction to Harry in a relationship with "the Sneak" while expecting a baby with a DeathEater, should be interesting.
Keep up the good work,
-Koppe
Author's response
Thank you for reading and for a very thorough review. You seem to have access to my storyline notes, some of the fun will happen as Harry reunites with his Hogwarts friends and endures or enjoys their various reactions. Think the magical world's equivalent of "Guess Who's Coming to Dinner?"