Review for Love Knows No Age

Love Knows No Age

(#) midlifecrisi 2007-02-22

Hey, did any of you ever think that maybe some people have a legitimate beef with the story? You really need an editor (punctation, spelling). Your time line is all over the place (how did husband die falling thru ice in May - see chapt 2) and you are throwing every plot device known to man into the mix. You have real potential but having a public meltdown over some critisism isn't going to help you at all.