This story keeps getting better and better. I can see the characters and the scenes! Great stuff, with interesting ideas and a nifty turn of phrase.
Just a funny thought - Voldemort tries to contact Harry through his dreams one night, but Harry's up late on the 'phone.
imagining V getting a busy signal
Author's response
beeep "We're sorry, your nightmare cannot be completed as dialed. Please check the brainwave and try your nightmare again." beeeep I'm glad you like how I'm pacing it. I was particularly pleased with this chapter.