Interesting parental interaction; I liked the idea of questioning James' father's fidelity: it was original and well scripted. I am slightly disappointed that you didn't use the passage of time to define Narcissa's character any more, but that's allright.
I am curious as to if Harry is living in the castle or merely teaching there?
Nice chapter overall. Keep up the good work.
Author's response
The second line of this chapter states that Harry moved from his muggle hotel to Hogwarts, sorry, I didn't think that needed to be stressed much more than that. Thanks for the review. BJH